The assignment was to create two paragraphs. One paragraph should be a belief or opinion you that you believe in. The other paragraph should be the opposite of the paragraph you believe in but written as if you believe that one also. The objective of the assignment is writing both paragraphs so that you can't tell which one you actually believe in. Read them below and let me know which one you think I believe in!
Kittens are adorable because they are so small like a fur ball. They are so laid back most of the time. They are smaller than a dog so they can sit with/by you easier. They are almost never perceived as threatening. They are house trained with a litter box very easily. They are easy to transport in vehicles. Cats purr unlike dogs. Cats are the better pet by far.
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I think you presented both sides similarly but I believe you like dogs more because you seemed to have a bit more of an emotional appeal
ReplyDeleteI believe you like dogs more because of how you used better examples and descriptive words. Also your sentence structer was well put for the dogs side
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